Yo, yo, yo,
where'd you go?
i totally miss you so,
and its it not like your hot
you talk and walk like a robot.
Go back to sleep,
so i dont hear a peep,
cuz you never stop talking
and i hate when you talk
i promise.
so do me a favor,
buy some ice cream that has better flavor.
cuz this taste like crap,
and i dont eat ice cream that taste bad.
You'd know that if you knew me,
cuz im me and your not,
so keep dreaming,
gypsie
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WOw, wow dude
ReplyDeleteyour soo completely ganster
This is a real crappy poem but somehow I could see this being a hit rap song.? Just saying get on that. Ha I love the part that you just throw in ice cream. classic!!!!
keep up the poetry (and hopeful rap career)
i hate your poem.
ReplyDeleteexcept i kind of like the part where it says "you talk and walk like a robot"
and gypsie
except you spelled it wrong
its actually gypsy
This makes no sense but thats good. I think you should expand on the ice cream part though. Thats good stuff
ReplyDeleteDue, I actually really like this poem alot. I like the line where you say you talk and walk like a robot, because that is how alot of people are, and tey need to get real.
ReplyDeleteEazy muthaeffing E,
ReplyDeleteThis poem... was horrible. I didn't understand one bit of it. It kept my interest though, which made it nice. I think that you should use the line "Cuz you never stop talking and i hate when you talk" in your next poem.
Stay Classy.
Papa Burgundy.